"Cool Dude" & "Vote For Me"

What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Change comes to come’s

• Change especially to specially

• Delete the comma after brother

• No change should be made.

What change needs to be made in sentence 5?

• Delete but

• Change Freshman to freshman

• Delete the comma after year

• No change needs to be made in sentence 5.

How should sentence 12 be changed?

• Change fascinated to fasinated

• Delete the comma after cool

• Change had never pursued to hadn’t never pursued

• Change it to them

What change should be made in sentence 16?

• Change resourses to resources

• Change the comma after tournament to a period

• Change than to then

• No change should be made.

What is the correct way to write sentence 24?

• Yes, I’m Tyson’s little brother, that’s only part of my identity, though, I’m a cool guy in my own way, too.

• Yes, I’m Tyson’s little brother, but that’s only part of my identity. Because I’m a cool guy in my own way, too.

• Yes, I’m Tyson’s little brother, but that’s only part of my identity. I’m a cool guy in my own way, too.

• Sentence 24 is written correctly in the paper.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Change environment to enviroment

• Delete the comma

• Change your to you’re

• No change should be made in this sentence.

What change should be made in sentence 13?

• Delete where

• Insert a comma after class

• Change a lot to alot

• Change means to had meant

How should sentence 15 be changed?

• Change experiences to experience’s

• Change will help to helped

• Change acomplished to accomplished

• Sentence 15 should not be changed.

What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Insert a comma after day after day

• Change that to this

• Change am to was

• No change should be made in sentence 22.

What is the correct way to write sentence 26?

• In closing, I give you this solemn promise. That if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• In closing, I give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• In closing, to give you this solemn promise: if you elect me as president of the sophomore class, I’ll give it my all.

• Sentence 26 is written correctly in the paper.