What needs to be improved?<br /><br />"This is my routine. I sleep at 9pm. I eat breakfast at 7am. finally, I watch TV in the afternoon."

• Use of English 2: Grammar structure
• Use of English 1: Vocabulary from the unit
• Organization 1: Logical sequence

What needs to be improved?<br /><br />"My mother feels sick. She go should to the doctor. I think she not eat too much junk food."

• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling
• Use of English 2: Grammar structure
• Content: all requirements

What needs to be improved?<br /><br />"Teacher. I don't feel good. I have a fever. I have a stomachache. I have a headache. I need to go to the doctor. Bye."

• Organization 2: structure of text - connectors and phrases
• Communicative achievement: communicative purpose - text is understood
• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling

What needs to be improved?<br /><br />"Im goin to celebrate my birday. my friends are goin to come to my parti. i cant wait for tomorro.

• Content: all requirements
• Organization 1: logical sequence
• Mechanics: punctuation - capitalization - spelling