MC Writing SOL Review

Which one is more clear?

• Don’t give the fish with small bones in it to the cat.

• Don’t give the fish to the cat with small bones in it.

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CCSS.W.8.2D

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• The train station was located by a river which was made of red brick.

• The train station which was made of red brick was located by a river.

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CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• He found a pie on the top shelf of the refrigerator baked by his wife.

• On the top shelf of the refrigerator, he 

        found a pie baked by his wife.

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CCSS.W.8.1C

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• Mr. Smith spotted a bird sitting on a telephone wire that he could not recognize.

• Mr. Smith spotted a bird that he could 

        not recognize sitting on a telephone wire.

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CCSS.L.8.2A

CCSS.W.8.3D

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• We bought a picnic table with collapsible legs from a clerk.

• We bought a picnic table from a clerk 

        with collapsible legs.

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CCSS.W.8.2A

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• I gave the scraps of meat to the dog which had been left on the dinner plates.

• I gave the scraps of meat which had been left on the dinner plates to the dog.

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CCSS.L.8.2A

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• We watched the man on the roof jump to the ground.

• We watched the man jump to the ground on the roof. 

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CCSS.W.8.3D

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• From the antique store dealer, we bought a round dining room table with massive oak legs.

• From the antique store dealer with  

   massive oak legs we bought a dining room table.

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CCSS.W.8.2D

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• Dancing all night, the dawn was seen by everyone.

• Dancing all night, everyone saw the 

       dawn.

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CCSS.L.8.2A

CCSS.W.8.4

Which one is more clear?

• In the past, four presidents have been killed.

• In past history, four presidents have been killed.

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CCSS.W.8.2D

CCSS.W.8.4