Revising and Editing

What is the best way to change sentence 11.

There coats ranged in color from orange-red to brownish-yellow.

• change There to Their

• change to to two

• change color to Color

• change coats to koats

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CCSS.W.5.1A

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

As the town mice hunt for wild flowers, birds, and berries, the hungry owl that want to eat them as a snack is hunting them.

• Change them to they

• change want to wants

• change town to Town

• take out the comma after berries

What is the best way to edit this sentence?

Mr. and mrs. Town Mouse seem disappointed when they see the plain home of the country mice.

• change country to Country

• change Town Mouse to town mouse

• Change plain to plane

• change mrs. to Mrs.

Which is the best way this sentence should be written?

The females were about eight feet long, a bit small than the male.

• the Females were about eight feet long, a bit small than the males.

• The females were about eight feet long, a bit smaller than the male.

• The Females were about ate feet long. A bit smaller than the male.

• The females Were About Ate Feet Long. A Bit Smaller Than The Male.

What change should be made to this sentence?

She received a neckless, some flowers, and lots of other nice things.

• change flowers to flower

• change received to receives

• change necklass to necklace

• nothing should be changed

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CCSS.L.5.2E

How would you combine the two sentences?

She knew what they saw.

She usually just turned away so they couldn't see her face.

• She knew what they saw, she usually just turned away so they couldn't see her face.

• She knew what they saw because she usually just turned away so they couldn't see her face.

• She knew what they saw, and she usually just turned away so they couldn't see her face.

• She knew what they saw and she usually just turned away so they couldn't see her face.

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CCSS.L.5.3A

CCSS.W.5.3C

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?

They would talk the knight before and decide what they should wear the next day.

• change decide to decided

• change knight to night

• add a comma after before

• make no change

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CCSS.L.5.1D

What change, if any, should be made to the sentence below?

Katie did not have a scar on her rite cheek.

• change did not to wouldn't

• change a to an

• change rite to right

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.5.4A

What edit needs to be made to this sentence?

"How long until we get there? Timothy asked his dad for the tenth time.

• Add quotation marks after the question mark

• change asked to asks

• change for to four

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.5.2C

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

"We're here!" shouted Timothy, as they pulled into the driveway.

• change shouted to shouts

• change We're to Were

• change driveway to Driveway

• Make no changes