Peer Review-Fairy Tale Retellings

The name of the person I am reviewing is: ________(first) ________(last)

Reorder the following based on the writers strengths (left is strongest, right is weakest)

• Character Development

• Storyline/how they adjusted the plot

• Mood

• Tone

• The narrator's voice

If I had to choose a two things my writer could improve on most, they would be...

• Their character development

• Adding more description to the setting

• Making a more intense conflict

• Readjusting the storyline so that it makes more sense to the reader chronologically

My favorite character in the story is _______________

Write one sentence that helps the writer know their strengths in the story

Write a sentence describing what the writer could have developed more in their story

On a scale of 1-10, 1 being extremely weak and 10 being extremely strong, how would you rate their language usage? (were they consistent in verb tenses? Did they use strong vocabulary to describe? etc)

On a scale of 1-10, 1 being extremely weak and 10 being extremely strong, how would you rate their creativity in the story? (Did they think outside of the box? Were the characters, setting and plot unique enough?)

On a scale of 1-10, 1 being extremely weak and 10 being extremely strong, how would you rate their use of punctuation? (Are they in need of some variety in their punctuation? Did they miss punctuating?)

On a scale of 1-10, 1 being extremely weak and 10 being extremely strong, how would you rate their ability to develop a setting? (Could it have been better described with imagery? Does the setting fit the story?)