Editing and Revising QSE 1

I hope that my mother bought me harry potter and the order of the phoenix.

How should the book title be capitalized?

• Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix

• Harry Potter and the Order Of The Phoenix

• Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix

• Harry Potter and the order of the Phoenix

Answer explanation

We capitalize all significance words in the titles + the first word.

How come you went run in the middle of the night?

How should I correct this sentence?

• change went to want

• change went to go

• change run to running

• change run to ran

What transition word should be added at the beginning of sentence 2?

(1) The sky turned dark. (2) The rain began.

• Instead,

• Suddenly,

• Of course,

• After,

Which of the following sentences is an unnecessary detail?

(1) The girls loved going to Grandmother's house. (2) They got to stay up late, pick strawberries, and have sleepovers in the boathouse. (3) It was almost like going to the Grand Canyon. (4) They rarely got to visit Grandmother since she lived in Colorado.

• Sentence 1

• Sentence 2

• Sentence 3

• Sentence 4

What word needs to be capitalized in the sentence below?

Why is the world is that man running towards walmart so fast?

• World

• Man

• Walmart

• Fast

What sentence would strengthen the paragraph below?

My favorite food is pizza. It is so delicious, especially when there are lots of toppings! My favorite kind of pizza is thick crust, pepperoni, and bacon pizza from Papa Johns.

• We order pizza every Friday.

• I don't like pizza when there are pineapples are it.

• My family makes their own pizza sometimes, but it is not as good as Papa Johns.

• The worst kind of pizza is Dominos.

What needs to be fixed in the sentence below?

Your acting completely irrational!

• Change the ! to a ?

• Change Your to You're

• change completely to complete

• change acting to act

Which of the following should always be capitalized?

• Names of States

• Names of People

• Names of Grocery Stores

• All of the options

What needs to be fixed in the sentence below?

There going to be going to the grocery store after they go skiing.

• Add a comma before "after"

• Change There to They're

• Capitalize Grocery Store

• change skiing to will ski

What needs to be changed in the sentence below?

I know that they wanted too go with me.

• change too to to

• capitalize they

• change go to going

• change they to them