Sentence Fragments II

Studying late into the night hoping she would finish her homework.

• Studying late into the night, Alyssa hoped she would finish her homework.

• Correct As Is

• Studying late into the night, hoping she would finish her homework.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

Standing on the edge of the pool, she gathered the courage to jump.

• Correct As Is

• Dana standing on the edge of the pool, she gathered the courage to jump.

• Gathering the courage to jump standing on the edge of the pool.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.4

Under the sand in a beautiful wooden box, the treasure waiting to be found.

• Correct As Is

• Under the sand in a beautiful wooden box, the treasure was waiting to be found.

• The treasure, waiting to be found, in a beautiful wooden box under the sand.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

Everyone left the concert as soon as it was over, trying to get home before the storm.

• As soon as it was over.

• Leaving the concert as soon as it was over, trying to get home before the storm.

• Correct As Is

Across the river a little Florida town in the middle of nowhere.

• Across the river was a little Florida town in the middle of nowhere.

• Correct As Is

• In the middle of nowhere across the river a little Florida town.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

Mark finally wakes up in the morning. Then eats breakfast.

• Eats breakfast, Mark finally wakes up in the morning.

• Correct As Is

• Mark finally wakes up in the morning and then eats breakfast.

Each night, the kids meet under the bridge to discuss their secret plans to escape.

• Each night, the kids under the bridge to escape.

• Under the bridge, to discuss their secret plans to escape each night.

• Correct As Is

Underneath the house a hidden tunnel that goes across the entire town.

• Underneath the house is a hidden tunnel that goes across the entire town.

• Correct As Is

• A hidden tunnel that goes across the entire town underneath the house.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.W.9-10.4

Under the sand in a beautiful wooden box, the treasure and a map that would lead them to the city of Atlantis.

• Correct As Is

• The treasure and a map to lead them to the city of Atlantis under the sand in a beautiful wood box.

• The treasure and a map that would lead them to the city of Atlantis is under the sand in a beautiful wooden box.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4

On top of the cabinet, a key is placed carefully where no one can see it.

• A key, carefully where no one can see it, on top of the cabinet.

• Correct As Is

• Where no one can see it on top of the cabinet, a key.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.1

CCSS.L.9-10.2

CCSS.W.9-10.4