Revise and Edit

What does it mean to REVISE your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

What does it mean to EDIT your writing? Pick 2

• Fix spelling errors

• Fix capitalization errors

• Add or remove words and sentences

• Move words or substitute synonyms for words

April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night. With their dad. april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

• change neice to niece

• change nephew to nefew

• change trains to tranes

• No change

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

• Combine sentence 1 and 2

• Combine sentence 2 and 3

• Remove sentence 1

• No change

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

Which change needs to be made to this passage.

• Capitalize april in sentence 3

• Capitalize nephew in sentence 1

• Capitalize trains in sentence 3

• No change

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

What is the best way to revise sentence 3?

• April played trains with them. They also watched a movie called Monsters Inc. They all had a good time!

• April played trains with them. They also watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time!

• April played trains with them they all had a good time

• No change

1.April watched her neice and nephew while they're mom went out for the night.

2.With their dad.

3.april played trains with them they watched a movie called monsters inc they all had a good time

What change should be made?

• change good to fantastic

• change trains to tranes

• change neice and nephew to kids

• No change

1.i went camping with my family.

2.We whent fishing and I caught a big fish.

3.I also whent Swimming with my brother.

4.We hade a camp fire every night.

5.The camping trip was lots of fun

What changes should be made to the passage?

• Capitalize i in sentence 1

• Capitalize camp in sentence 4

• Capitalize trip in sentence 5

• No change

1.i went camping with my family.

2.We whent fishing and I caught a big fish.

3.I also whent Swimming with my brother.

4.We hade a camp fire every night.

5.The camping trip was lots of fun

What changes should be made to the passage?

• Change whent to went

• change family to familie

• Change fire to fyre

• No change

1.i went camping with my family.

2.We whent fishing and I caught a big fish.

3.I also whent Swimming with my brother.

4.We hade a camp fire every night.

5.The camping trip was lots of fun

What changes should be made to the passage?

• Change Swimming to swimming

• change family to Family

• Change fire to Fire

• No change