11/14-11/15 Do-Now

Suddenly being transported back to childhood as a memory plays in my mind like a movie. What change, if any, should be made to this sentence?

• Change being to I am

• Insert a comma after childhood

• Change plays to playing

• No change necessary

I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils. What is the correct way to write this sentence?

• I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness that teases my nostrils

• As I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teases my nostrils.

• Pulling gently at its crisp brown shell, the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils.

• When I pull gently at its crisp brown shell, and the aroma of its gooey sweetness teasing my nostrils.

The smell of freshly cut grass reminds me of my twelve-year-old self, playing Soccer on Saturday mornings. How should this sentence be changed?

• Insert a comma after grass

• Change reminds to reminding

• Change playing to to play

• Change Soccer to soccer