Editing 11/28

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

(1) There’s no way to prevent bad things from happening, so

it’s best to learn as much as you can from it.

• a. Change There’s to There isn’t

• b. Change it’s to its

• c. Change it to them

• d. No change is needed

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CCSS.L.3.1A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

(2) The company has facilitators who lead participants through

games and activities in which everyone must colaborate in

order to successfully complete the challenges.

• a. Change activities to activitys

• b. Change colaborate to collaborate

• c. Change has to have

• d. No change is needed

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CCSS.L.9-10.1B

CCSS.L.4.1C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

(4) Between the hundreds of incoming and outgoing flights,

there is an airplane mechanic busyly filling up each of the

aircraft with thousands of gallons of fuel.

• a. Change busyly to busily

• b. Change an airplane to a airplane

• c. Change fuel to full

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1G

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

(3) On a average day the Empire State Building in New York

City receives more than ten thousand visitors.

• a. Change than to then

• b. Change a to an

• c. Change receives to recieves

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.2.2C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

(5) The power lines that provide our cities with electricity

requires regular maintenance, especially following severe

thunderstorms.

• a. Change cities to city’s

• b. Change requires to require

• c. Change severe to sever

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.9-10.1B

CCSS.L.7.1A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

(6) If you’re planning to pursue a career in technology one

day you may need to develop your coding skills now rather than later.

• a. Change than to then

• b. Change you’re to your

• c. Add a comma after day

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What is the correct way to write sentence 7?

(7) Therefore, quite a few animals, including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger,

and Mountain Gorilla, they have been added to the endangered species list.

• Therefore, quite a few animals have been added to the endangered species

  list. Including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger, and Mountain Gorilla.

• Therefore, quite a few animals, including the Javan Rhino, Malayan Tiger,

  and Mountain Gorilla, have been added to the endangered species list.

• The sentence is correct.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

8. What is the correct way to write sentences 12 and 13?

(12) When she arrives, she usually has a box. (13) Containing dozens of t-shirts

and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box, it is containing dozens of t-shirts

  and pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and

  pants. That have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box it contains dozens of t-shirts and

  pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

• When she arrives, she usually has a box containing dozens of t-shirts and

  pants that have been donated by her friends and family.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

(9) According to travel websites Tuesday is the best day to

book a flight because they are cheapest.

• a. Change Tuesday to tuesday

• b. Change cheapest to most cheap

• c. Add a comma after websites

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

(10) Geologists are still trying to fully understand this

phenomenon but they believe that all seven continents were

once part of one supercontinent.

• a. Change Geologists to Geologists’

• b. Change believe to beleive

• c. Add a comma after phenomenon

• d. No change needed

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CCSS.L.6.2A

CCSS.L.4.2C