Revising & Editing 12/12/22

9. What change should be made in sentence 1?

• A. Change took to had took

• B. Insert a comma after vacation

• C. Change city to City

• D. No change should be made.

10. How should sentence 5 be changed?

• F. Change more perfect to perfecter

• G. Change the period to a question mark

• H. Insert quotation marks at the end of the sentence

• J. Sentence 5 should not be changed.

11. What is the correct way to write sentence 8?

• A. Lady Liberty was designed in France. Because she was made out of copper and steel.

• B. Lady Liberty was designed in France and made out of copper and steel.

• C. Lady Liberty was designed in France. And made out of copper and steel.

• D. Sentence 8 is written correctly in the paper.

12. What change should be made in sentence 9?

• F. Change She to They

• G. Change in 350 to she was in 350

• H. Change piece’s to pieces

• J. No change should be made in sentence 9

13. What is the correct way to write sentences 13 and 14?

• A. She was also a birthday present she was meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

• B. She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate. America’s independence from Great Britain.

• C. She was also a birthday present. Which was meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

• D. She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

14. What change should be made in sentence 15?

• F. Change French to french

• G. Change were to was

• H. Change they to it

• J. Change revolutionary war to Revolutionary War

15. What change needs to be made in sentence 18?

• A. Change In 1886 to It was in 1886

• B. Change country’s to countries

• C. Delete most

• D. No change needs to be made in this sentence.

16. How does sentence 21 need to be changed?

• F. Change beleive to believe

• G. Change rays to ray’s

• H. Insert a comma after oceans

• J. Sentence 21 does not need to be changed