Edit and Revise Homework

In this step, you read over your writing & make change to improve what you have written.

• Brainstorm

• Draft

• Revise/Edit

• Publish

Which sentence uses commas correctly?

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges and bananas.

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and, bananas.

• I went to the store, and bought apples oranges and bananas.

• I went to the store and bought apples, oranges, and bananas.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

"Their are to people in you’re store.” What change should be made?

• Change their to there
• change to to two
• change you're to your
• all of the above

You can't play with this toy car. ............. broken.

• Its

• It's

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

People ask me why ____ late to school.

• Your
• You're

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.1.1D

Which words should be capitalized in the sentence below?

The building on the corner of lake street and green avenue is called the columbus environmental center.

• The, Lake Street, Green Avenue, Columbus Environmental Center

• The, Green Avenue, Columbus

• The, Lake Street, Green Avenue, Columbus

• The, Columbus

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What change should be made to sentence 13?

• Insert and before it

• Insert but before it

• Insert or before it

• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

How should sentences 7 and 8 be combined?

• Johnson made it popular, so he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, because he inspired other performers.

• Johnson, made it popular, when he inspired other performers.

• Johnson made it popular, and he inspired other performers.

Tags

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

(1) We should try to keep our parks clean and free of trash. (2) This shows that we want to take care of our natural resources. (3) To remind people, we post rules about how to take care of our parks. Which sentence could best follow sentence 3?

•  A. Knowing the rules will help people keep our parks clean. 
• B. Going to the parks on weekends can be fun for everyone. 
• C. Many people use the parks every weekend. 

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1F

(1) There were once thousands of peregrine falcons in the eastern United States. (2) People were using harmful pesticides. (3) Some pesticides are very useful. (4) Eventually, people stopped using harmful pesticides to help the falcons. Which sentence, if any, does not belong in the paragraph? 

• Sentence 2 
• Sentence 3
• Sentence4