Writing revision

Which type of writing does the writer use?

The Best Season.

        What is the best season of the year? Most people like winter among all The Four Seasons. However, winter is the best season for many reasons.

         First, you can enjoy. Many delicious food and drinks in winter. Hot chocolate, coffee, tea, and Sahlab are amazing drinks that can make you feel warm. Also, in winter you can eat very delicious meals such as hot soup, Kapsa, pizza, Mahshi, noodles, and Jerish. All of this can give you warmness and energy.

        Second, winter is a season that is full of activities. For example, snowball fights with your friends makes you forget how cold weather is. Go camping and sit around the campfire gives you a feeling of peace. Also, when the rain falls, you will feel happy, especially if you run under the rain.

      To sum up, if you like cold weather, then winter will be the perfect season for you. Playing and eating are the most enjoyable things everyone adores.

• Expository

• Persuasive

• Narrative

What is the purpose for this selection?

• To entertain the reader.

• To inform the reader.

• To persuade the reader with his opinion.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.6

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.6

Which word it shows the conclusion: -

• To sum up

• In my opinion

• In addition

Which word it shows the sequence: -

• To sum up

• First

• In addition

Tags

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

This part of the essay is...........................       

What is the best season of the year? Most people like winter among all The Four Seasons. However, winter is the best season for many reasons.

• Introduction

• Body

• Conclusion

This part of the essay is.............................          

    First, you can enjoy. Many delicious food and drinks in winter. Hot chocolate, coffee, tea, and Sahlab are amazing drinks that can make you feel warm. Also, in winter you can eat very delicious meals such as hot soup, Kapsa, pizza, Mahshi, noodles, and Jerish. All of this can give you warmness and energy.

• Introduction

• Body

• Conclusion

Tags

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

This part of the essay is.............................      

  To sum up, if you like cold weather, then winter will be the perfect season for you. Playing and eating are the most enjoyable things everyone adores.

• Introduction

• Body

• Conclusion

How could the writer support his purpose?

• By solving the problem

• By reasons and examples

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.6

CCSS.RI.6.6

CCSS.RL.3.6

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.6

Choose another title that could fit with this essay

• The Perfect Season

• Delecious Drinks

• Snowball Fight