Revise and Edit

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus

• change everywhere to every  where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• add a comma before and 

• change helpfull to helpful

• insert a comma after difficult

• no change is needed

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 

• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 

• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 

• No change is needed

"We've got to go quickly, said his mother.
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change we've to we'll

• change quickly to quick

• insert quotation marks after quickly

• no change is needed

(1) The students visited Angelo State University and toured the observatory. (2) They had a wonderful time!
I want to add more detail after sentence 1. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 1?

• The students went on a field trip.

• All of the kids got to ride on the school bus to the university. 

• An observatory is a place where you can look at stars through a telescope. 

• The telescope was huge!

Which of the following is NOT a complete sentence?

• Timothy turned his homework in late.

• He ran quickly.

• However, she was.

• The bird perched on the power line. 

The lite from the morning sunrise was absolutely beautiful. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change sunrise to sun  rise 

• change beautiful to beautifull

• change lite to light 

• no change is needed

the little girl was quite excited to go shopping at the mall with her grandmother. 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• change the to The

• change quite to quiet

• change grandmother to Grandmother

• no change is needed

Michael used colored pencils for the art project. Liam used paints for the art project. 

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, and Liam used paints.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project, Liam used paints for the project.

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project and Liam used paints. 

• Michael used colored pencils for the art project then Liam used paints for the art project.