editing review

What change should be made in the following sentence?

This rise in cities steel supplies would not have occurred without the work of Henry Bessemer.

• change rise to raise

• change cities to cities'

• insert a comma after supplies

• change would not have occurred to will not have occurred

Last summer, my family and I camped by the Mississippi river.

• change family to Family
• change I to me
• change river to River
• The sentence is correct.

In the fall, I enjoy visiting my grandmothers house and baking cookies.

• change fall to Fall

• Delete the comma

• Change grandmothers to grandmother's

• Make no change

4. Sloths ________________ very slowly through the rainforest.

• move

• moves

12. Our cat ________________ under my bed when he’s scared.

• hide

• hides

Mason asked his friend, "do you have a pencil that I can borrow?"

• Delete the comma

• Cahnge do to Do

• Change I to i

• Make no change