Revise/Edit 3/23/23

What is the best way to revise the following sentence?

I flew, for a two-week stay, on an airplane to my grandmother's house last summer.

• I flew on an airplane to my grandmother's house last summer for a two-week stay.

• I flew on an airplane for a two-week stay. To my grandmother's house last summer.

• I flew to my grandmother's house last summer for a two-week stay on an airplane.

• On an airplane for a two-week stay, I flew to my grandmother's house last summer.

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Which sentence could be added at the end of the following paragraph?

I flew, for a two-week stay, on an airplane to my grandmother's house last summer. When she greeted my plan at the airport, I asked her if she would buy me some candy at the gift sop. She said she would do something even better. She would teach me how to make my own candy. The kind of candy she was referring to, I learned, was called rock candy.

• I had never flown on an airplane before and I was a little nervous.

• Learning how to make my own candy sounded like a great idea!

• We could have bought some rock candy at the gift shop and saved a lot of time.

• The history of candy-making is a fascinating subject and I know a lot about it!

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

Which word would be a more accurate word to replace melted in the following sentence?

First, she melted some sugar into two cups of hot water.

• dropped

• put

• heated

• dissolved

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CCSS.L.1.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.K.1B

Which sentence could best be added to the end of the following paragraph?

Ten days later, we took the jar out of the cabinet. The string was covered with large crystals of sugar. She puled out the string of crystals and dried it with a towel. She let me have the first taste.

• My grandmother took me to the State Fair the next day and bought me some cotton candy and that was even better.

• I think we should have left the candy in the cabinet for a few more days so the crystals could grow larger.

• That old-fashioned rock candy took ten days to make, but the taste of it made it worth the wait!

• I hoped you enjoyed reading my paper as much as I enjoyed that candy!

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

What change, if any should be made in the following sentence?

My grandfather bought me a book called the history of stamps when I was six years old, and that book inspired me to begin my collection.

• Insert a comma after grandfather

• Capitalize the title the history of stamps

• Change begin to begun

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?

I already have more that four thousand stamps, and I plan to collect alot more.

• Change already to all ready

• Change have to has

• Change alot to a lot

• No change should be made

How should the following sentence be changed?

I've told everyone I no to save their old stamps for me.

• Change everyone to anyone

• Change no to know

• Change their to there

• Insert a comma after stamps

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CCSS.L.1.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A

What is the correct way to write the following sentences?

• He doesn't give me stamps, but he will trade them with me.

• He will trade them with me, and he doesn't give me stamps.

• He doesn't give me stamps, or hi will trade them with me.

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CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.4.1C

What change should be made in the following sentence?

Over the long winger holiday, him and I sip hot chocolate as each of us tries to get the most advantageous trade.

• Change winter to Winter

• Delete the comma

• Change him to he

• No change is needed

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in the following sentence?

It's going to be a challenge because there are close to two hundred different countries!

• Change It's to Its

• Change because to cause

• Change there to they're

• No change should be made

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CCSS.L.3.1A