Revising and Editing task cards

A newly worded thesis statement

In conclusion, this essay talks about

Compelling information that completes the idea of your paper.

Zoomed out at the end to include how this idea is important to the state, country, or world at large.

In the Excerpt from "A Permanent Home" Rowling states, "The northern and southern states distrusted each other."

This is an example of how the north and the south had different opinions. "The northern and southern states distrusted each other."

This quote shows the north and the south distrust each other. "The northern and southern states distrusted each other."

This quote explains the north and the south distrust each other. "The northern and southern states distrusted each other."

In that quote

This quote says

quotation marks

explanation of quote used

a counterargument agrees with your opinion

a counterargument helps you fill up the page

acknowledging the other side helps prove the writer's credibility

a counteragrument and refutation look good

"The storm is approaching." he whispers,

"The storm is approaching," he whispered.

"The storm is approaching," he whispers.

The storm is approaching, he whispers,

"Is it this one?" they wondered.

"Is it this one" they wondered.

"Is it this one" they wondered."

Is it this one? they wondered.

The wind swept her air and her eyes began to tear as she hurdled towards the loop.

The Incredicoaster is an intense roller coaster.

The roller coaster was scary!

The loop on the Incredicoaster scared her.

She lifted her collar.

She tightened her scarf.

She was very cold.

She turned her face from the biting wind.

There are many opinions on the nation's capitol.

The two passages "A Capitol Place" and "A Permanent Home" both are about the nations capital.

In both the passages it talks about the different opinions people had bout where to locate the capital.

After the Revolutionary War (1775-1793) Americans tried to figure out the best way to govern themselves.