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Some may argue that allowing students to put on make-up can boost their confidence. ____, I think it is not appropriate.

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They will spend time chatting about make-up trends. ____, they will spend a lot of time applying it instead of studying.

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They will spend more time putting on make-up instead of studying. ____, their academic results will be greatly affected.

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Why I think schools should not allow students to wear make-up is that these products are, _______, harmful to the skin. Minor risks include skin problems like acne and blackheads and the major problems include a risk of cancer development.

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Teenagers wear make-up to beautify themselves. _______, they should realize the side effects of these cosmetic products.

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Conclusion paragraph: _________, allowing students to wear make-up to school may cause distraction from their studies.

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In addition, it is harmful to their health. ____, I believe that no schools should allow their students to wear make-up.

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On general, teenagers face a range of challenges and problems as they become older. Academic pressure, social anxiety, and mental health issues are just a few of the issues that teenagers may struggle with. (Find 1 mistake)

To great extent, the choices that teenagers make during this time can have lasting effects on their future, and it is important for them to learn to make informed and thoughtful decisions (Mistake 2)

Therefore it is also crucial for teenagers to learn to make responsible decisions themselves and take control of their own lives.  (Mistake 3)