Editing Writing: Writing a Myth p. 70

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 2?

• A She was a weaver very good and made beautiful clothes.

• B She was a very good weaver and made beautiful clothes.

• C She was very good a weaver and made a beautiful clothes.

• D No revision is needed.

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

2. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

(4) "When Athena heard this, she became very angry and go to visit the girl."

• A Change go to went.

• B Change the girl to a girl.

• C Change became to become.

• D No change is needed.

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CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.10

3. Which sentence does NOT belong in this story?

• A Sentence 2

• B Sentence 6

• C Sentence 9

• D Sentence 11

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CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.4.6

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6