Unit 6 Revising/Editing Set 2

Which sentence could be added to provide more structure

to the end of the introduction paragraph?

• You should be aware of your table manners no matter where you are.

• Just like the people, foods across the globe have different flavors.

• Chewing with your mouth closed is acceptable in many countries.

• Table manners vary in different countries.

Jimena needs a better transition at the beginning of sentence 7.

Which transition should replace Therefore?

• Besides

• Clearly

• Even so

• Similarly

Jimena would like to insert a transition in sentence 12.

What is the most effective transition to add after People in Chile?

• also

• definitely

• however

• therefore

Which transition should be added to the beginning of sentence 13?

• Different from what most believe

• As you might expect

• After all

• If you think about it

Which sentence should Jimena add after sentence 21

to improve the conclusion of her paper?

• Using good table manners will cause your parents, grandparents, and teachers to be proud.

• But where you are eating is just as important as how you are eating!

• If you don’t use good table manners, you will not be invited for meals.

• Which table manners are most important to you?