Thurs 4/13

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change lives to live

• Change then to than

• Change closets to closet’s

• No change should be made in sentence 1.

Select the word that corrects the error in sentence 7.

It _______seem like a house that small would have room for anything except a bed, but Shafer is very creative.

• do’nt

• does’nt

• doesn’t

• do not

What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 16?

• Change hang’s to hangs

• Delete the comma

• Change its to it’s

• No change needs to be made

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 17?

• Change world’s to worlds

• Insert most before narrowest

• Change brazil to Brazil

• Make no change

Select the word that corrects the error in sentence 21.

As a result, some people ______houses that were only as wide as a typical front door!

• builds

• built

• building

• builted

What is the correct way to write sentence 22?

• Many people say that a big house is better, there are other people all over the world who disagree.

• While many people say that a big house is better. There are other people all over the world who disagree.

• Many people say that a big house is better, but there are other people all over the world. Who disagree.

• Sentence 22 is written correctly in the paper.

Tyler would like to add the following detail to the second paragraph (sentences 9–12).

It’s cold outside, but the subway is warm.

Where should Tyler insert this sentence?

• After sentence 10

• After sentence 11

• After sentence 12

• This sentence should not be added to this paragraph.

What is the BEST way to revise sentence 19?

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.

• My mother shrieked. As she warned me about approaching strange animals.

• My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me.

• My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals.

Tyler wants to add a transition to the beginning of sentence 23.  Select the word or phrase that could best be added to the beginning of sentence 23.

______________ over time we formed a sort of friendship.

• Yet,

• In the same way,

• For example,

• Therefore,

Tyler wants to add a closing sentence to his paper. Which sentence could BEST follow sentence 40 and help bring his paper to a close?

• Subway Cat seemed happy to be on his own once again.

• He was the subway cat, and now he was worried about having to find his own food.

• He carted his silly little self straight to the door.

• And that is now the end of the story about the brave little subway cat I met one day.