Revise & Edit Review

Gabby would like to add a more effective controlling idea.

Which sentence should replace sentence 3 to serve as a more effective controlling idea for her paper?

• A. People should pay more attention to eating with the proper forks, knives, and spoons at mealtime.

• B. The following details provide the information about how forks, spoons, and knives are used around the world.

• C. Yet, the story of how modern-day forks, spoons, and knives developed is an interesting journey through time.

• D. However, most people have no idea that forks, spoons, and knives have been in existence for thousands of years.

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CCSS.RI.6.2

CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.6.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

Gabby has not used the MOST effective word in sentence 8. Which word should replace stuff in this sentence?

• A. materials

• B. parts

• C. units

• D. pieces

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CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.K.1B

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 13 and 14?

• A. Forks during the Middle Ages were smaller, they became more widely used for eating, but not everyone liked the idea of using forks.

• B. Forks during the Middle Ages, which were smaller and more widely used for eating,though everyone did not like the idea of using them.

• C. During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and more widely used for eating, and everyone did not like the idea of using forks, though.

• D. During the Middle Ages, forks were smaller and became more widely used for eating,but not everyone liked the idea of using them.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 24?

• A Utensils have changed over time and still changing to meet modern needs.

• B Utensils having changed over time, there are still changes to meet modern needs.

• C Utensils have changed over time and are still changing to meet modern needs.

• D Utensils have changed over time, which are still changing to meet modern needs.

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CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

Gabby wants to add a transition at the beginning of sentence 20 to improve the connection to the previous sentence.

Which transition should Gabby add to the beginning of sentence 20?

• A For this reason,

• B In other words,

• C In any case,

• D At the same time,

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CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• F. Change violin to Violin

• G. Insert a comma after boring

• H. Change disagree to disagreeing

• J. No change is needed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?

• F. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it. When you perform on stage

  before an appreciative crowd.

• G. All of the effort you invest in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage

  before an appreciative crowd.

• H. All of the effort, you invest in developing your skills. Is worth it when you perform on

  stage before an appreciative crowd.

• J. All of the effort you invest, in developing your skills is worth it when you perform on stage

  before an appreciative crowd.

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CCSS.L.4.1F

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• A. Change Friendships to Freindships

• B. Change as to until

• C. Change rehearse to will rehearse

• D. Change you’re to your

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CCSS.L.2.2C