P6 T3W2 A Surprising Find Editing

Which part of the story should I mention the theme?

• Throughout the story if possible

• In the climax

• In the conclusion

• Never

Which technique should I use in the Climax to heighten suspense.

• Intro Phrases

• Dialogue

• Slow-motion

• Character Thoughts

A faint scratching noise woke me up.

What technique is this?

• Slow-motion

• 5 senses

• Introductory Phrases

• Show-not-tell

How many Intro Phrases did you identify?

• 2

• 6

• 3

• 5

What does using Intro Phrases help to achieve?

• To express interaction between characters

• To set the scene

• To vary sentence structure

• To heighten suspense

I told myself that it was just the wind.

Which technique can you use to better this sentence?

• Dialogue

• 5 senses

• Character Thoughts

• Show-not-tell

Which is right?

• I told myself: It was just the wind.

• It is just the wind, I told myself.

• It was just the wind, I told myself.

• I told myself: It is just the wind.

I was scared.

Which technique can you use to better this sentence?

• Show-not-tell

• Dialogue

• 5 senses

• Character Thought

I told her that the rat was there.

Which technique can you use to better this sentence?

• Show-not-tell

• Slow-motion

• Dialogue

• 5 senses