Writing Revising & Editing Practice Week 9 Monday

(1) I was sad to go home from the Christmas party. (2) As we drove up to our house, though, I am excited to see that my dad put up our Christmas lights and wreaths!

What is the best way to REVISE this sentence 2?

• As we drive up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

• As we drove up to our house, though, we was excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

• As we drove up to our house, though, I be excited to see that my dad had put up our Christmas lights and wreaths.

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1B

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere.

What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• change everywhere to every where

• change dessert to desert

• make no change

• insert a comma after difficult

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

The teacher was helpfull and showed the student how to work the difficult math problem.

What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• no change is needed

• change helplfull to helpful

• insert a comma after difficult

• add a comma before and

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.5.2B

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different boardgames to play!

What is the correct way to write the sentence above?

• change me and my brother to my brother and I

• change lots to lot's

• change there to their

• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1D

CCSS.L.3.1A