1: Revise and Edit

A Trip to the Zoo

(1) Last week our class took a trip to the zoo. (2) The weather was a little cold—we could see our breath—but not frigid. (3) Everyone was full of enorgy and excited to see all the animals. (4) When the class got off the bus, there was a bit of a crush to get in the front door, but then everyone spread out again. (5) We all got into groups and had to promise not to wander away from our teacher. (6) My group went to see the penguins first! (7) We had to go down a flight of stairs, so our teacher told us to graspt the railing. (8) The penguins were so cute! (9) It was fun to watch them wobble as they walked. (10) We walked around the zoo so much that I got a blister on my foot. (11) It was a terrific day except for that blister.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change full to foll

• Change enorgy to energy

• Change excited to excitad

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

A Trip to the Zoo

(1) Last week our class took a trip to the zoo. (2) The weather was a little cold—we could see our breath—but not frigid. (3) Everyone was full of enorgy and excited to see all the animals. (4) When the class got off the bus, there was a bit of a crush to get in the front door, but then everyone spread out again. (5) We all got into groups and had to promise not to wander away from our teacher. (6) My group went to see the penguins first! (7) We had to go down a flight of stairs, so our teacher told us to graspt the railing. (8) The penguins were so cute! (9) It was fun to watch them wobble as they walked. (10) We walked around the zoo so much that I got a blister on my foot. (11) It was a terrific day except for that blister.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 7?

• Change flight to flite

• Change stairs to stare

• Change graspt to grasp

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1D

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

A Trip to the Zoo

(1) Last week our class took a trip to the zoo. (2) The weather was a little cold—we could see our breath—but not frigid. (3) Everyone was full of enorgy and excited to see all the animals. (4) When the class got off the bus, there was a bit of a crush to get in the front door, but then everyone spread out again. (5) We all got into groups and had to promise not to wander away from our teacher. (6) My group went to see the penguins first! (7) We had to go down a flight of stairs, so our teacher told us to graspt the railing. (8) The penguins were so cute! (9) It was fun to watch them wobble as they walked. (10) We walked around the zoo so much that I got a blister on my foot. (11) It was a terrific day except for that blister.

What is the conjunction in sentence 7?

• We

• so

• railing

• teacher

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

A Stray Puppy

(1) John had always wanted a dog. (2) He thought it would be terrific to have a pet that would greet him at the door each time he arrived home. (3) John’s mother thought a dog would keep them awoke at night and that it would be hard to train. (4) One day, John came across a stray puppy. (5) He brought it home and promised to do all the training himself. (6) John was able to sway his mother! (7) They kept the puppy. (8) John learned how to praise the puppy when its behavior was good and correct any behavior that was wrong. (9) John was so happy to have a dog! (10) He proved that he was able to be responsible for a new pet.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3?

• Change awoke to awake

• Change night to nite

• Change train to trane

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1D

A Stray Puppy

(1) John had always wanted a dog. (2) He thought it would be terrific to have a pet that would greet him at the door each time he arrived home. (3) John’s mother thought a dog would keep them awoke at night and that it would be hard to train. (4) One day, John came across a stray puppy. (5) He brought it home and promised to do all the training himself. (6) John was able to sway his mother! (7) They kept the puppy. (8) John learned how to praise the puppy when its behavior was good and correct any behavior that was wrong. (9) John was so happy to have a dog! (10) He proved that he was able to be responsible for a new pet.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• Change learned to lerned

• Change praise to prase

• Change wrong to rong

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

CCSS.RL.5.6

CCSS.RL.6.10