Revise and Edit #9

The School Dance

(1) Chris and Jordan were good friends, so he was sure she would say yes when he asked her to the dance. (2) Chris felt nervous, but he calmley approached Jordan one day. (3) She had seemed distracted lately. (4) Chris had offered to study together countless times, but Jordan was always busy. (5) Chris had thought that asking her to the dance would be effortless, but he felt shaky! (6) Chris walked over to Jordan and asked, “Will you go to the dance with me?” (7) Jordan replied that she was going to the dance with Miguel. (8) Chris was disappointed, but they made an agreemant to dance to one song. (9) Chris was determined that the dance would still be delightful. 1 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Change nervous to nervus

• Change calmley to calmly

• Change calmley to calmlly

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1G

The School Dance

(1) Chris and Jordan were good friends, so he was sure she would say yes when he asked her to the dance. (2) Chris felt nervous, but he calmley approached Jordan one day. (3) She had seemed distracted lately. (4) Chris had offered to study together countless times, but Jordan was always busy. (5) Chris had thought that asking her to the dance would be effortless, but he felt shaky! (6) Chris walked over to Jordan and asked, “Will you go to the dance with me?” (7) Jordan replied that she was going to the dance with Miguel. (8) Chris was disappointed, but they made an agreemant to dance to one song. (9) Chris was determined that the dance would still be delightful. 1 What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• Change disappointed to disapointed

• Change agreemant to agreemint

• Change agreemant to agreement

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1B

CCSS.L.3.1B

CCSS.L.K.1C

A Delicious Lunch

(1) Austen and Hannah were making burritos for lunch on the pateo. (2) First, they spread their tortillas on a plate. (3) Then they added beans and cheese. (4) Before they rolled up the tortillas, they decided on other toppings. (5) “I’m going to put tomato slices in my burrito,” said Austen. (6) “I prefer to eat burritos with salsuh,” said Hannah. (7) “I like the really spicy kind.” (8) Austen and Hannah agreed on one thing. (9) They both wanted dessert when they finished their burritos. (10) They decided to have vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1?

• Change pateo to patio

• Change burritos to burreetos

• Change pateo to pateeo

• Make no change

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CCSS.L.2.2C

A Delicious Lunch

(1) Austen and Hannah were making burritos for lunch on the pateo. (2) First, they spread their tortillas on a plate. (3) Then they added beans and cheese. (4) Before they rolled up the tortillas, they decided on other toppings. (5) “I’m going to put tomato slices in my burrito,” said Austen. (6) “I prefer to eat burritos with salsuh,” said Hannah. (7) “I like the really spicy kind.” (8) Austen and Hannah agreed on one thing. (9) They both wanted dessert when they finished their burritos. (10) They decided to have vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Make no change

• Change salsuh to salsah

• Change prefer to prefur

• Change salsuh to salsa

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

A Delicious Lunch

(1) Austen and Hannah were making burritos for lunch on the pateo. (2) First, they spread their tortillas on a plate. (3) Then they added beans and cheese. (4) Before they rolled up the tortillas, they decided on other toppings. (5) “I’m going to put tomato slices in my burrito,” said Austen. (6) “I prefer to eat burritos with salsuh,” said Hannah. (7) “I like the really spicy kind.” (8) Austen and Hannah agreed on one thing. (9) They both wanted dessert when they finished their burritos. (10) They decided to have vanilla ice cream with chocolate sauce.

What is the direct object in sentence 9?

• burritos

• They

• dessert

• wanted

• finished

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I