8. How should sentence 4 be changed?

D Change prioratize to prioritize

B Change the semicolon to a comma

9. What is the correct way to write sentence 1?

B Despite graduating from school years ago, Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

A Despite graduating from school years ago. Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently, whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

C Despite graduating from school years ago Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently. Whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

D Despite graduating from school years ago, Juan still cherishes his football jersey and wears it consistently; whether for trips to the gym or daily chores.

11. Sentence 6 has an error. Select the response that corrects the error. Therefore, if one observes Juan strolling while adorned in his esteemed _____________________ acknowledgment of his unwavering devotion to football would be much appreciated, for a genuine football fan never truly retires.

North Star Middle School football jersey,

North star middle school football jersey,

North Star middle school football jersey,

1. What is the correct way to write sentence 6?

C In recent years, drones have become increasingly popular. Now they are used mainly by civilians.

A In recent years drones, have become increasingly popular; and now they are used mainly by civilians.

B In recent years drones have become increasingly popular, yet they are used mainly by civilians.

2. What change is needed in sentence 8?

B Delete the comma after efficient

3. What is the correct way to write sentence 1?

B As a student, I strongly believe that Snapchat holds an edge over TikTok.

A As a student. I strongly believe that Snapchat holds an edge over TikTok.

C As a student I strongly believe that Snapchat. Holds an edge over TikTok.

5. What change should be made in sentence 3?

C Insert a comma after structures

6. What is the correct way to write sentence 8?

A By recognizing the Mayans' contributions, we can better appreciate the rich knowledge of the ancient world.

B By recognizing the Mayans' contributions. Then we can better appreciate the rich knowledge of the ancient world of the Mayans.

C By recognizing the Mayans’ and all their contributions we can better appreciate, the rich knowledge of the ancient world.

7. What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

A By expanding or contracting these cells, the octopus can create diverse patterns and hues that mimic its surroundings. This change makes it nearly invisible to potential predators or unsuspecting prey.

B By expanding or contracting these cells, the octopus can create diverse patterns and hues that mimic its surroundings and this change makes it nearly invisible to potential predators or unsuspecting prey.

C By expanding or contracting these cells, the octopus can create diverse patterns and hues that mimic its surroundings this change makes. It nearly invisible to potential predators or unsuspecting prey.

8. What change should be made in sentence 6?

B Change the comma after aquarium to a semicolon

D Change firsthand to first hand

9. What is the correct way to write sentence 4?

D My congratulations to her were heartfelt and endearing; her achievement is a testament to her vast intellectual capacity, unwavering diligence, and unbeatable communication skills.

A My congratulations to her were heartfelt and endearing her achievement is a testament, to her vast intellectual capacity, unwavering diligence, and unbeatable communication skills.

B My congratulations to her were heartfelt and endearing, her achievement is a testament. To her vast intellectual capacity unwavering diligence, and unbeatable communication skills.

C My congratulations to her were heartfelt and endearing. And her achievement is a testament to her vast intellectual capacity. Unwavering diligence, and unbeatable communication skills.

What change(s) should be made in the following sentence? In order to register for classes I had to submit my Birth Certificate to the school.

In order to register for classes, I had to submit my birth certificate to the school.

In order to register for classes I had to submit my birth certificate, to the school.

In order to register for classes, I had to submit my Birth Certificate to the school.

Which of the following is the correct way to write the sentence-

Yesterday, my dad made homemade spaghetti sauce by pressing garlic and using fresh tomatoes.

Yesterday, my dad made homemade spaghetti sauce by pressing garlic and used fresh tomatoes.

Yesterday my dad made homemade spaghetti sauce by pressing garlic and used fresh tomatoes.

Yesterday my dad made homemade spaghetti sauce by pressing garlic and using fresh tomatoes.

What is the correct way to write the following sentence?

No, freshmen can't leave campus for lunch.

No Freshmen can't leave campus for lunch.

No freshmen can't leave campus for lunch.

No, Freshmen can't leave campus for lunch.

6. Which sentence would best follow and support sentence 7?

C All you need is a ball and a flat surface; anyone can play.

A That is why everyone wants to play soccer.

B It is just such an easy sport, and everyone can be good at it.

8. Kordyn wants to add a supporting sentence to the paragraph. Which sentence should be added after sentence 4?

B In a traditional classroom, many students get lost in the one-size-fits-all approach.

A Most students feel trapped in school.

C School is not for everyone; some students struggle.

D Some classrooms are the perfect fit, while others may not be.

8. What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 2?

B I am contacting you today regarding the deadline for the English Language Arts paper that is due tomorrow.

A I am contacting you today for the English Language Arts paper regarding the deadline that is due tomorrow.

C I am contacting you today regarding the deadline since I must submit tomorrow the English Language Arts paper.

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MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

1. What change should be made in sentence 2?

A Change helped to help

B Change without to with out

C Delete the comma after words

D Change she to her

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

2. What change should be made in sentence 3?

A Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes. A short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

B Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes; a short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

C Similar to concealing your greens beneath your mashed potatoes, a short paragraph employs tricks to bypass undesirable content.

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

3. What change should be made in sentence 2?

A Delete the comma after approaching

B Change to share to sharing

C Insert a comma after participate

D Change Summer Program to summer program

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

4. What change is needed in sentence 7?

A Change for to of

B Insert a comma after time

C Change the comma after consideration to a semicolon

D Change anticipate to anticipating

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

5. What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

A Despite their odd appearance, these little creatures may be the key to medical breakthroughs!

B Despite their odd appearance. These little creatures may be the key to medical breakthroughs!

C Despite their odd appearance; these little creatures may be the key, to medical breakthroughs!

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CCSS.L.4.1F

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

6. How should sentence 6 be changed?

A Change are to were

B Delete the comma after axolotls

C Change of to for

D Change unlocking to unlock

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION

2 mins • 1 pt

7. What change should be made in sentence 1?

A Change middle school to Middle School

B Delete the comma after student

C Change we to you

D Change is to are

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

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Revising and Editing Practice

1. What change should be made in sentence 2?

2. What change should be made in sentence 3?

3. What change should be made in sentence 2?

4. What change is needed in sentence 7?

5. What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

6. How should sentence 6 be changed?

7. What change should be made in sentence 1?

8. How should sentence 4 be changed?

9. What is the correct way to write sentence 1?

10. What change should be made in sentence 2?

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