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What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 7?

• Delete the comma after Later,

• Change instrucsions to instructions

• Change sent to send

• Sentence 7 should not be changed.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the best way to combine sentences 5 and 6?

• There are many types of fireworks each kind has its own unique sound.

• There are many types of fireworks, or each kind has its own unique

  sound.

• There are many types of fireworks, and each kind has its own unique

  sound.

• There are many types of fireworks, so each kind has its own unique

  sound.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

Malcolm wants to use a more accurate word than big in sentence 10. Which of the

following could BEST replace this word?

• gigantic

• popular

• biggish

• heaping

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 25?

• In contrast,

• For example,

• In the same way,

• Finally,

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?

• Change Colorado River to Colorado river

• Delete the comma after long

• Change informs to informed

• No change should be made.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4?

• Change grabed to grabbed

• Delete the comma after friend

• Change and to but

• No change is needed in sentence 4.

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

• Change the period to a question mark

• Change you to he

• Change laughed to laugh

• No change needs to be made in sentence 9.

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CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

 In sentence 3 the word say is not clear. Which word could BEST replace say and help the author improve the meaning of sentence 3?

• think

• whisper

• wonder

• yell

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CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 5 and 6?

• We fold it into many shapes and fly it through the air.

• When we fold it into many shapes and we fly it through the air

  sometimes.

• Flying it through the air sometimes, we fold it into many shapes.

• We fold it and it is in many shapes as we sometimes fly it through the

  air.

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CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

Which transition word or phrase could BEST be added to the beginning of sentence 19?

• On the other hand,

• In the same way,

• Over the years,

• For this reason,

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CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E