SOME NOTES FOR IELTS WRITING TASK 1: CHART / GRAPH

Câu nào ĐƯỢC dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. The most noticeable feature is the drop in the proportion of the annual gross capacity of fossil fuels.

• 1. According to the graph, we can see that the proportion of the annual gross capacity of fossil fuels reduced a lot.

• 1. The big thing you can spot is the decrease in the percentage of fossil fuels' total power each year.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. It’s pretty much clear that the proportion of the capacity for wind will get a big going up.

• 1. The proportion of the capacity for wind is anticipated to increase.

• 1. It is predicted that there will be an increase in the capacity for wind power.

Câu nào ĐƯỢC dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. According to the chart, by and large, it seems that the number of people working part-time rose very consistently.

• 1. The number of people working part-time became more and more, not surprisingly.

• 1. The number of people working part-time increased consistently.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. Obviously, from the chart, over the period as a whole, we can discern that women working full-time were seen to experience the greatest change.

• 1. The greatest change was in the number of women working full-time.

• The most notable difference was observed in the number of women engaging in full-time jobs.

Câu nào ĐƯỢC dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. Fantastically, the USA had the most foreign students, which is no surprise.

• 1. The USA had the most foreign students, possibly because this country is a melting pot, attracting top students from different corners of the world.

• 1. The USA had the most foreign students, rising from approximately 179,000 in 2004 to around 245,000 in 2012.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. In 2012, Australia had the most foreign students, making up a big chunk at 24% of the total guys.

• 1. The percentage of foreign students was highest in Australia, at 24% of total student numbers in 2012.

• 1. Australia had the largest share of international students, accounting for 24% of the total students in 2012.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. Chinese and Indian takeaways are popular stuff, at 34% and 26%.

• 1. Two items that are popular are Chinese and Indian takeaways, at 34% and 26%.

• 1. Chinese and Indian takeaways are much more popular than all the others, at 34% and 26%.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• Moving for the purpose of study saw the greatest rise overall, with a jump of approximately 62,000.

• Moving due to study tended to get the biggest rise, with a jump of approximately 62,000.

• The most significant increase was in the number of people relocating for educational reasons, experiencing a surge of around 62,000.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. Rainfall drops slightly to around 13 millimetres in September and then rises steadily again to just under 60 millimetres in December.

• 1. Rainfall drops slightly to around 13 millimetres in September, and the reason is unknown, but it may partly be due to changing weather patterns. 

• 1. After a slight decrease to around 13 millimeters in September, rainfall rises steadily, reaching just below 60 millimeters by December.

Câu nào KHÔNG dùng trong writing chart?

• 1. Men constitute the majority of the employees in the company.

• In my opinion, the company has a clear preference for males, because it hires a lot of male employees.

• 1. The majority of the company's employees are men.