1/8/24 Revise/Editing Quiz

Seena got to read for an hour. ___________closing her book, she got ready for bed.

• After

• Similarly

• Nevertheless

• However

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.5.1A

Gigi almost always brought cookies for snack at school. _____________ , today she just wasn't in the mood.

• Therefore

• In addition to

• However

• Nevertheless

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CCSS.L.1.6

CCSS.L.5.6

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 16 and 17?

(16) The dogs barked in their cages. (17) Then the workers put them on leashes and took them for walks.

• Until the dogs barked in their cages, then the workers put them on leashes and took them for walks.

• Barking in their cages, the workers put the dogs on leashes and took them for walks.

• The dogs barked in their cages, then the workers put them on leashes and took them for walks.

• The dogs barked in their cages, and then the workers put them on leashes and took them for walks.

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CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.3.1I

CCSS.L.7.1B

What is the best way to revise this sentence?
The book Sara is reading is very interesting, and it is interesting because it is a graphic novel. 

• The book Sara is reading is very interesting it is also a graphic novel.
• Very interesting because it is a graphic novel, Sara is reading the book. 
• No change is needed.
• The book Sara is reading is very interesting because it is a graphic novel. 

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CCSS.L.4.1F

(22) At the end of the season, we got together with our neighbors for another picnic. (23) As we enjoyed the fruits—and vegetables—of our labor, we discovered something.

Which sentence should Angela add after sentence 23 to create the most effective closing for her paper?

• That is the end of our garden story.

• Friends can be the best and worst parts of life.

• Our garden had helped us cultivate a lot of new things, for which we were very happy.

• Not only had we grown some amazing food, but we had also made some special friends.

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CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RL.3.3

CCSS.RL.4.3

CCSS.RL.5.3

There were many ducks and I saw them all.

• Add a comma after ducks

• Add a semicolon after ducks
• No change needed

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

In the 1800s, women beginned to speak out about the right to vote.

• began to speak
• begins to speak
• beginning to speak
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

Many people believed that letting women vote was a dangerously idea.

• danger
• dangerouser
• dangerous
• Make no change

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CCSS.L.3.1A