Revise and edit combining sentences, transition words

Revise the following question. They can either start a program that lets students train future assistance dogs, for the community, or they can start a school buddy reading group.

• They can either start a program that lets students train future assistance dogs for the community, or they can start a school buddy reading group.

• They can either start a program that lets students train future assistance dogs for the community or they can start a school buddy reading group.

• They can either start a program that lets students train future assistance dogs or they can start a school buddy reading group, fro the community.

• They can either start a program that lets students train future assistance dogs, for the community. Or they can start a school buddy reading group.

Revise the following question: The students either ride their bikes, on the the street or they canvplay in the backyard

• The students either ride their bikes on the the street or they can play in the backyard.

• The students either ride their bikes on the the street, or they can play in the backyard.

• The students either ride their bikes on the the street. Or they can play in the backyard.

• The students either ride their bikes on the the street or they can play, in the backyard.

After school we can either ride our bikes, to the park. Or stay inside and play video games.

• After school we can either ride our bikes to the park or stay inside and play video games.

• After school we can either ride our bikes to the park, or stay inside and play video games.

• After school we can either ride our bikes to the park. Stay inside and play video games.

• After school we can either ride our bikes, to the park or stay inside and play video games.

What is the BEST way to combine the following 2 sentences: This program would teach kids to contribute to their community. It would also be fun at the same time!

• This program would teach kids to contribute to their community and it would also be fun at the same time!

• This program would teach kids to contribute to their community, it would also be fun at the same time!

• This program would teach kids to contribute to their community it would also be fun at the same time!

• This program would teach kids to contribute to their community, and it would also be fun at the same time!

1. What is the BEST way to combine sentences 1 and 2?

(1) I sat on my front step. (2) I looked across the street.

• I sat and looked on my front step and across the street.

• I sat on my front step and looked across the street.

• I sat on my front step, and I looked across the street.

• I sat and looked on my front step across the street.

2. What is the correct way to write sentences 3 and 4? (3) This means he can go to the mall. (4) Whenever he wants.

• This means he can go to the mall whenever he wants.

• This means he can go to the mall, whenever, he wants.

• This means, he can go to the mall, whenever he wants.

• Sentences 8 and 9 are correct.

3. What is the correct way to write sentences 5 and 6?

(5) In Africa they were prized by their owners. (6) Because of their hunting skills.

• In Africa they were prized by their owners because of their hunting skills.

• Because of their hunting skills in Africa they were prized by their owners.

• In Africa, they were prized by their owners because, of their hunting skills.

• Their hunting skills, prized by their owners, were in Africa.

4. What is the correct way to write sentences 7 and 8?

(7) Even though they are uncomfortable. (8) Safety goggles should be worn at all times.

• Even though they are uncomfortable, safety goggles should be worn at all times.

• Even though they are uncomfortable, but safety goggles should be worn at all times.

• Even though they are uncomfortable, and safety goggles should be worn at all times.

• Sentences 7 and 8 are correct.

What is the BEST way to combine these sentences: It was a good idea. It was a dangerous idea.

• It was a good idea but it was a dangerous idea.

• It was a good idea that was also dangerous.

• It was a good but dangerous idea.

• It was a dangerous idea yet it was also good.

Which of the following sentences is correct?

• I wanted to go to school today, but I was too tired.

• I wanted to go to school today but I was too tired.

• I wanted to go to school today, but, I was too tired.

• None of the above