Revising and Editing Writing

The dessert has hot sand, cactus, and rocks everywhere. 
What change, if any, needs to be made to this sentence?

• delete the comma after cactus
• change everywhere to every  where
• change dessert to desert
• make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

Me and my brother went over there because they had lots of different board games to play! 
What change, if any, is needed in the sentence above?

• Change me and my brother to my brother and I
• change lots to lot's
• change there to their
• no change is needed

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

20 million people almost visit Disney World each year.
What is the correct way to write the sentence above? 

• 20 million people visit Disney World almost each year. 
• Almost 20 million people visit Disney World each year. 
• 20 million people visit Disney World each year, almost. 
• No change is needed

Tags

CCSS.L.2.1E

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.1G

Taking out words that don't make sense in a sentence happens in the editing phase of the writing process.

• True
• False

Tags

CCSS.W.4.4

CCSS.W.4.5

The boys (drove/drived) the car down the street. 

• drove
• drived

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1E

CCSS.L.4.1B

CCSS.L.5.1.B-D

CCSS.L.5.1C

CCSS.L.5.1D

What a beautiful view (./?/!)

• .
• ?
• !

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2B

CCSS.L.4.3B

CCSS.L.K.2B

(They're/Their/There) boots got wet in the rain.

• They'r
• Their
• Ther

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1A

CCSS.L.3.2D

Which capital letter is used incorrectly?
The boy's sister, Monica, loved the Pepperoni pizza.

• The
• Monica
• Pepperoni

Tags

CCSS.RF.3.3B

CCSS.RF.3.3C

CCSS.RF.3.3D

CCSS.RF.4.3A

CCSS.RF.5.3A

Revising is when the writer makes sure that the writing _______.

• Has punctuation
• Flows well together
• Uses capital letters
• Is spelled correctl

Tags

CCSS.W.4.4

CCSS.W.4.5

Editing is when...

• I never edit because it's boring

• I correct capitalization, punctuation, and spelling errors.

• the writing flows well.

• I consider my life choices.