Revise & Edit Tubman/Amos

How should sentence 2 be changed?

• Change made to maked

• Change philadelphia to Philadelphia

• Change using to useing

• Sentence 2 is correct

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 6 and 7?

• They would stop at “stations” and the stations were homes where they could hide safely.

• Homes where they could hide safely were “stations” they would stop.

• Stop at “stations” they were homes where they could hide safely.

• They would stop at “stations” which were homes where they could hide safely.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?

• Delete the word not

• Change caught to catched

• Change her to she

• Change the period to a question mark

Which transition word should be inserted before sentence 11?

• Then

• Finally

• Although

• In fact,

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2?

• Change would to wood

• Change bringing to bring

• Change take to taking

• Change them to it

The word make is not the right word for sentence 4. Which word should replace make in the sentence?

• use

• invent

• bake

• open

Which detail BEST follows sentence 6?

• Bloomingdales sells clothing, shoes, and accessories.

• Amos has three sons and one daughter.

• People enjoyed eating the delicious cookie while shopping.

• Reading has always been one of Amos’ passion.

How should sentence 8 be changed?

• Change bought to buyed

• Change maked to made

• Change for to four

• Change his to him

When Scooter were two years, old, he left his home in Texas.

What change, if any, should be made to the above sentence?

• change left to leaved

• change Texas to texas

• change were to was

• make no change

1.Then Scooter met Officer Mike and things changed. 2. Scooter and Officer Mike became best friends instantly. 3. Officer Mike helped Scooter learn the things he needed to do as a police dog. 4. Officer Mike used to be in the army before becoming a police officer. 5. Scooter trusted Officer Mike and learned quickly. 6. Thanks to Officer Mike, Scooter became one of the best police dogs Sanger has ever seen.

The above is hard to follow because one sentence does not belong. Which sentence should be deleted from this paragraph?

• sentence 1

• sentence 2

• sentence 3

• sentence 4