Writing Practice

What is a more clear way to write this sentence:

The details became clear to me about our upcoming field trip.

• The details about our upcoming field trip became clear to me.

• The upcoming field trip became clear to me and the details.

• About our upcoming field trip, the details became clear to me.

What should be changed in this sentence to make it more clear?

The school bought it to help students view the solar eclipse.

• Change school to Speer Elementary

• Change solar eclipse to Solar Eclipse

• Change students to 6th graders

• Change it to solar eclipse glasses

I really wanted to go to the zoo, but when I went I was surprised by how run-down it looked. Many of the buildings looked old and needed new paint. There weren't very many animals. The zoo may not be open for long.

What transition word could be added at the beginning of "The zoo may not be open for long."

• Therefore,

• Unfortunately,

• However,

• But,

Its important to read a little bit each day, but many students don't like to.

What change should be made in this sentence?

• Change students to Students

• Change like to to want to

• Change Its to It's

• The sentence should not be changed.

Reading is another way to improve your knowledge, students have many chances to read every day.

What is the correct way to write this sentence?

• Reading is another way. To improve your knowledge, students have many chances to read everyday.

• Reading is another way to improve your knowledge. Students have many chances to read every day.

• Reading is another way, to improve your knowledge. And students have many chances to read every day.

• The sentence is written correctly.

All of these thing help us become better readers.

• Change help us to helps us

• Change thing to things

• Change readers to reader

• The sentence should not be changed.

We go to lunch they go to recess.

What change should be made to this sentence?

• We go to lunch, and they go to recess.

• We go to lunch, they go to recess.

• We go to lunch, and they go. To recess.

• The sentence is correct.