AV5_OPINION ESSAY (2)

"Some people say that children no longer need to go to school and everything can now be learnt online. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"

Q (?): Which is the best BACKGROUND SENTENCE?

• Online learning is becoming hugely popular and especially during and even after the pandemic, most schools and universities have offered classes online.

• Certain individuals believe that children should not attend school because the internet holds every bit of information that could be learned.

• From my experience, I partially agree with this opinion for the following reasons.

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"High blood pressure makes the heart work harder. .............................. , it can lead to diseases of the heart such as heart attack."

• As a result

• In addition

• However

• Because

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"It is true that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. .............................. , we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education.

• As a result

• In addition

• However

• For example

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"Students are more likely to be an active member of the class when they know a reward is possible. .............................. , a teacher I know used treats such as chocolate and candy in class."

• As a result

• In addition

• On the other hand

• For example

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"Many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. .............................. , some people choose a certain career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society."

• As a result

• In addition

• However

• For example

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"Getting access to high-quality healthcare in a city is easier than in remote areas where individuals have to travel a lot to cure their illnesses. ............................. , in my district, there are more than 5 different hospitals with all the services that a patient might need."

• Furthermore

• Therefore

• For example

• However

Choose the best transition to fill in the blank:

"Many people argue that urban life causes more stress while offering little advantages for its citizens. ............................. , I partially agree with this opinion for the following reasons."

• Therefore

• From my experience

• This is because

• Furthermore

Which is the best language used in the Thesis Statement?

• There are several reasons why I agree with the statement in the question.

• The main reason why I agree with the topic.

• From my experience, I partially agree with this opinion for the following reasons.

• It is a common belief that I agree with the statement.

Which transition is used to add more information?

• However,

• Furthermore,

• On the other hand,

• Finally,

Choose the correct function of the supporting sentence:

"The Internet provides great resources to help people explore the world around them. For example, my little niece has learned much about Western cultures through the children's series 'Peppa Pig'."

• Example

• Result

• Fact

• Explanation