Our City Needs Bike Paths Revise & Edit

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• change city to City

• change cities to city's

• change u.s. to U.S.

• No change needs to be made

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

How does sentence 8 need to be changed?

• insert a comma after that

• change would to will

• change safest to safer

• no change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• change wouldn't to would'nt

• insert a comma after cars

• insert a comma after and

• no change needs to be made

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct way to write sentence 15?

• They would also save money because riding bikes is cheaper than driving cars you don't have to buy gas.

• They would also save money because riding bikes is cheaper than driving cars --you don't have to buy gas.

• They would also save money because riding bikes is cheaper than driving cars but you don't have to buy gas.

• Sentence 15 is written correctly in the letter.

What change needs to be made in sentence 22?

• capitalize member

• capitalize youth bicycling association

• capitalize city

• no change needs to be made

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

CCSS.RI.6.3

What change needs to be made in sentence 23?

• change public to publics

• change need to needs

• insert greater after more

• change the exclamation point to a period

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.1.1J

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.K.1D

What change if any should be made in sentence 19?

• change knew to known

• delete the comma after paths

• add a comma after vacasion

• change vacasion to vacation

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CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

What change, if any, should be made to sentence 20?

• delete the comma after Finally

• change were to are

• insert a comma after paths

• change less to fewer

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CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

What is the correct was to write sentence 21?

• Some of the people who usually drive would take their bikes, instead everyone would get where they want to go more quickly.

• Some of the people who usually drive would take their bikes, so everyone would get where they want to go more quickly.

• Some of the people who usually drive would take their bikes, everyone would get where they want to go more quickly.

• Some of the people who usually drive would take their bikes, if everyone would get where they want to go more quickly.

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CCSS.L.2.1F

CCSS.L.8.1C

CCSS.L.8.3A