3rd grade Editing Passage 2/from Kirk's Story

What change should be made in sentence 4?

(4) The coach walked up and greeted us. “I see you are all interested in being on Town creek Middle School’s track team,” he said.

• Change coach to Coach

• Change creek to Creek

• Change Middle to middle

  
  

• Change he to He

Tags

CCSS.RL.2.6

CCSS.RL.8.3

What is the correct way to write sentence 11?

(10) Each time it was my turn to run, I began shaking and it was hard to breathe. (11) so nervous!

• I was so nervous!

  
  

• He was so nervous!

  
  

• Was so nervous!

  
  

• So So nervous!

Tags

CCSS.RL.1.10

CCSS.RL.2.10

CCSS.RL.3.10

CCSS.RL.4.10

CCSS.RL.5.10

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 19?

(19) As soon as the whistel blew, I took off running.

• Change blew to blue

  
  

• Change off to of

• Change running to runing

• Change whistel to whistle

  
  

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.2.5

What change should be made in sentence 24?

(24) inside, I was grinning from ear to ear.

• Change grinning to grining

• Change the period after ear to a question mark.

• Change inside to Inside

• Change to to two

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.2.5

CCSS.RI.4.3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 20?

(20) My arms and legs moved faster than they ever had before.

• Change moved to moving

• Change My to my

• Change arms to arm

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.2.5

What change should be made in sentence 14?

(14) You has no reason to be nervous.

• Change has to have

• Change has to hasn’t

• Change has to had

• Change has to was

Tags

CCSS.RI.3.3

CCSS.RI.3.5

CCSS.RI.4.5

CCSS.RI.2.3

CCSS.RI.4.3