EDIT: Thru-Hiking the Pacific Crest Trail

What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

• Insert a comma after Hikers

• Change who to that

• Change pass to passes

• Change peeks to peaks

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E1.W.9.Dvi

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change hiker to Hiker

• Change named to he was named

• Change dreams to dreamed

• Insert a comma after trails

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E1.W.9.Dii

What change should be made in sentence 9?

• Change boost to boosted

• Change President to president

• Delete the comma after the word one

• Change national to National

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E1.W.9.Dv

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 11?

• Change recent to resent

• Insert a comma after thru-hikers

• Change have skyrocketed to has skyrocketed

• No change is needed.

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E1.W.9.Di