Revise 2

Which word would be a more precise word to use than good in sentence 5?

• thrilling

• beneficial

• friendly

• favorable

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CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• Understanding the limits these forces create when building roller coasters helps designers when improving roller coasters.

• Designers must understand the limits these forces create when building and improving roller coasters.

• The limits these forces create help designers who must understand these limits when they are building and improving roller coasters.

• Designers must understand the limits these forces create when building roller coasters and when improving roller coasters.

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CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 22?

• Will the cars move too fast to stay on the track during an abrupt turn?

• During an abrupt turn will the cars on the track stay to move too fast?

• To stay on the track will the cars move too fast during an abrupt turn?

• Will the cars to stay on the track move too fast during an abrupt turn?

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Greg has used an inappropriate transition at the beginning of sentence 32. Which transition should replace Meanwhile in this sentence?

• Therefore

• For example

• At least

• Similarly

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CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

Greg would like to provide additional support for the idea he has presented in sentence 38. Which sentence BEST follows and supports sentence 38?

• Most roller coasters have several hills and twists, although some hills are steeper than others.

• Building elaborate roller coasters costs amusement parks a lot of money.

• Other types of rides are being built at amusement parks because of limited space for traditional roller coasters.

• Designers are excited and hopeful about the possibilities of roller-coaster designs.

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CCSS.RI.7.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.7.1

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.1

Greg wants to improve the conclusion of his paper. Which sentence should replace sentence 43 to bring his paper to a more effective conclusion?

• Science is particularly useful when a new roller coaster is being designed.

• Students who want to become roller-coaster designers should know many science concepts.

• A well-designed roller coaster relies on knowledge of the laws of force and motion to ensure the ride is an amazing experience for everyone on board.

• For people to enjoy roller-coaster rides, designers need to refer to the laws of force and motion during early stages of design.

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CCSS.RI. 9-10.2

CCSS.RI.8.2

CCSS.RL.7.2

CCSS.RL.8.2

CCSS.RL.9-10.2