Revising & Editing Review

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change magnificent to magnificant

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change replies to replied

• Change her to their

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change the semicolon to a colon

• Change anything to nothing

• Change fretted to freted

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What is the correct way to write sentence 8?

• He saw Marta and hesitantly tossed his basketball to her.

• He saw Marta. And hesitantly tossed his basketball to her.

• He saw Marta, hesitantly tossed his basketball to her.

• He saw Marta but he hesitantly tossed his basketball to her.

Tags

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.5.1E

CCSS.L.7.1B

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change should be made in sentence 3?

• Change In contrast to Likewise

• Change eligable to eligible

• Change to vote to voting

• Change but to so

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1G

CCSS.L.3.1H

CCSS.L.5.1A

CCSS.L.5.1E

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 5?

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change percent to percint

• Insert a comma after ballot

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

What change should be made in sentence 8?

• Change officials' to officials

• Change decisions to desisions

• Change economy to Economy

• Change is to are

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

Which word would be a more precise word to use than good in sentence 5?

• thrilling

• beneficial

• friendly

• favorable

Tags

CCSS.RI.11-12.5

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.5

What is the BEST way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• Understanding the limits these forces create when building roller coasters helps designers when improving roller coasters.

• Designers must understand the limits these forces create when building and improving roller coasters.

• The limits these forces create help designers who must understand these limits when they are building and improving roller coasters.

• Designers must understand the limits these forces create when building roller coasters and when improving roller coasters.

Tags

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

What is the MOST effective way to revise sentence 22?

• Will the cars move too fast to stay on the track during an abrupt turn?

• During an abrupt turn will the cars on the track stay to move too fast?

• To stay on the track will the cars move too fast during an abrupt turn?

• Will the cars to stay on the track move too fast during an abrupt turn?

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CCSS.L.11-12.3A

CCSS.L.7.1C

Greg has used an inappropriate transition at the beginning of sentence 32. Which transition should replace Meanwhile in this sentence?

• Therefore

• For example

• At least

• Similarly

Tags

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.8.3

CCSS.RI.8.5

CCSS.RI.9-10.3

CCSS.RI.9-10.5