The Importance of Exercise

Sebastian needs to make his claim stronger. In which way can he revise sentence 2 to create a stronger claim?

• Everyone might want to consider exercise at least twenty minutes a day to stay healthy.

• Everyone should want to exercise at least twenty minutes a day to stay healthy.

• Everyone should exercise at least twenty minutes a day to stay healthy.

• Everyone could exercise at least twenty minutes a day to stay healthy.

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Sebastian wants to combine sentences 4-6 to remove repeating information. Which is the BEST way to combine these sentences?

• Exercising twenty minutes per day increases heart health, memory storage, and energy levels.

• Exercising twenty minutes per day increases heart health. It increases memory storage, and also increases energy levels.

• Exercising twenty minutes per day increases heart health memory storage and energy levels.

• Exercising twenty minutes per day increases heart health, memory storage, and increases energy levels.

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Sebastian has included a sentence that does not belong in the second paragraph (sentences 7-19). Which sentence should he remove?

• Sentence 16

• Sentence 17

• Sentence 18

• Sentence 19

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Sebastian wants to add a transition word or phrase to the beginning of sentence 20. Which of the following could he use in this sentence?

• First

• Next

• Finally

• For example

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Sebastian needs to combine sentences 21 and 22 for clarity. Which is the BEST way for him to combine these sentences?

• Some people like to run or walk briskly, so some like to play sports, such as basketball or soccer.

• Some people like to run or walk briskly, while some like to play sports, such as basketball or soccer.

• Some people like to run or walk briskly, but some like to play sports, such as basketball or soccer.

• Some people like to run or walk briskly some like to play sports, such as basketball or soccer.

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The word get is not the right word to use in sentence 23. Which word should replace get in this sentence?

• engage

• bore

• appeal

• like

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Which is the BEST way to combine sentences 29 and 30?

• Decide what works for you, and set a realistic goal.

• Decide what works for you, so set a realistic goal.

• Decide what works for you, or set a realistic goal.

• Decide what works for you, also set a realistic goal.

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What is the MOST effective revision to make in sentence 33?

• You may end up doing it more often!

• You may end up doing it longer!

• You will end up doing it for longer!

• You will end up doing it more often!

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For which reason should Sebastian combine sentences 40 and 41?

• So the last sentence does not begin with And

• To make it longer

• Because it is the conclusion

• Because it sounds better.

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