Edit 1

STORY 1: What change should be made in sentence 2?

• Delete the comma after Dad

• Change its to it's

• Change since to between

• Change these to them

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Delete the quotation marks before Your

• Change used to play to are playing

• Insert a comma after basketball

• Change them to him

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change toward to at

• Insert a comma after relatives

• Change greeted to greated

• Change warmly to warm

STORY 2: What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

• After becoming registered voters, many people have exercised their right to vote in every election.

• Many people have exercised their right to vote. Voted in every election after becoming registered voters.

• After becoming registered voters. Many people have exercised their right to vote in every election.

• Many people have exercised their right to vote, voted in every election, becoming registered voters.

What change should be made in sentence 4?

• Insert a comma after Today

• Change published to had published

• Change with to about

• Change low to lower

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?

• Change This to These

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change shockingly to shocking

• No change is needed.