STAAR Editing Practice with "Making a Cake"

What is the correct way to write sentence 2?

• After a few minutes, I was pleased to see fluffy whipped cream.

• After a few minutes, I pleased. To see fluffy whipped cream.

• After a few minutes. I pleased and saw fluffy whipped cream.

• After a few minutes, I was pleased to see it, it was fluffy whipped cream.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

CCSS.RI.5.3

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change expected to accepted

• Change otherwise to instead

• Change saw to seen

• Change hockey to Hockey

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.7.3

What change should be made in sentence 7?

• Delete the comma after asked

• Change did to Did

• Change forget to forgot

• Change baking to bakeing

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.5.3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

• Change usual to usually

• Change came to comes

• Insert a comma after plan

• No change is needed.

Tags

CCSS.RI.6.3

CCSS.RI.6.5

CCSS.RI.7.5

CCSS.RI.5.5

CCSS.RI.7.3