Revising & Editing practice 2024
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English
7th Grade
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1.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What is the best revision to make for this sentence:
She was walking shyly to her new seat, I thought about what it must feel like to be the new student.
Since she was walking shyly to her new seat, I thought about what it must feel like to be the new student.
If she was walking shyly to her new seat, I thought about what it must feel like to be the new student.
Because she was walking shyly to her new seat, I thought about what it must feel like to be the new student.
As she was walking shyly to her new seat, I thought about what it must feel like to be the new student.
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CCSS.L.11-12.3A
CCSS.L.7.1C
2.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
The writer needs to clarify (make it more clear) the meaning of this sentence. What is the most effective way to do this?
It must be very scary not to know nothing.
change It to I
change nothing to anyone
delete not
change scary to happy
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CCSS.RI.6.1
CCSS.RI.7.1
CCSS.RI.7.8
CCSS.RI.8.1
CCSS.RL.7.1
3.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What is the best way to revise this sentence:
There is no tackling, the public thinking the game is tame.
Soccer has no tackling and considering a tame sport.
The game has no tackling, the public finds finds soccer tame.
Because there is no tackling, soccer is thought to be a tame sport.
Football has tackling and soccer doesn't and soccer is not a tame sport.
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CCSS.L.11-12.3A
CCSS.L.7.1C
4.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What is the best way to revise this sentence:
What's really weird is that most bullies would be horrified to be called a bully it would come as a total shock.
What's really weird is that most bullies would be horrified to be called a bully, it would come as a total shock.
What's really weird is that most bullies would be horrified to be called a bully. Would come as a total shock.
What's really weird is that most bullies would be horrified to be called a bully; it would come as a total shock.
What's really weird is that most bullies would be horrified to be called a bully, however, it would come as a total shock.
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CCSS.L.9-10.2A
5.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What is the best way to combine these sentences:
Traffic in our big Texas cities gets worse every year. The problem affects everyone.
Traffic in our big cities gets worse every year, the problem affects everyone.
Traffic, a problem that affects everyone, gets worse every year in our big Texas cities.
Traffic is a problem that affects everyone who get worse every year in our big Texas cities.
Traffic in our big Texas cities gets worse every year while the problem affects everyone.
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CCSS.L.2.1F
CCSS.L.3.1H
CCSS.L.3.1I
CCSS.L.5.1E
CCSS.L.7.1B
6.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What is the best revision to make to this sentence:
It was the first affordable car, the Model T gave middle class Americans access to motorized personal transportation for the first time.
It was the first affordable car, the Model T gave middle class Americans access. To motorized personal transportation.
It was the first affordable car the Model T gave middle class Americans access to motorized personal transportation.
As the first affordable car, the Model T gave middle class Americans access to motorized personal transportation for the first time.
No change is needed.
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CCSS.L.4.1F
7.
MULTIPLE CHOICE QUESTION
45 sec • 10 pts
What change should be made in this sentence:
With more people on the road wanting to travel in the 1910s and 1920s, there was a need for more routes to help us get from one city to another.
change people to women
change routes to directions
change us to them
No change is needed.
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CCSS.L.3.1A
CCSS.L.6.1A
CCSS.L.6.1C
CCSS.L.6.1D
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