4/10 Revise & Edit Warm-Up

What is the best way to combine these sentences as a Complex sentence?
1) The tree branch fell on the roof. 
2) The roof was leaking.
3) We repaired the roof.

• After we repaired the roof the leak stopped.
• The tree branch fell on the leaking roof.
• The leaking roof needed to be repaired after the tree branch fell on it.
• We repaired the roof after a falling branch caused it to leak.

What is the best way to combine these sentences into a COMPOUND sentence?
1) I have been summoned to a special meeting of the Council.
2) Something must have happened.

• I have been summoned to a special meeting of the Council something must have happened.
• I have been summoned to a special meeting of the Council so something must have happened.
• I have been summoned to a special meeting of the Council, so something must have happened.
• I have been summoned to a special meeting of the Council, something must have happened.

What is the best way to combine these sentences using a List?
1) I have three favorite foods.
2) One is pizza.
3) One is steak.
4) One is brussel sprouts.

• My favorite foods are pizza and steak and brussel sprouts.
• One of my favorite foods is pizza and the other favorite foods are steak and brussel sprouts.
• Brussel sprouts, pizza, and steak.
• My three favorite foods are pizza, steak, and brussel sprouts.

Which of the following sentences is correct?

• Maggie who loved to eat snow cones was exhausted from her long day at the park.

• Maggie, who loved snow cones, was exhausted from her day at the park.

• Maggie, who loved to eat snow cones was exhausted, from her long day at the park.

• None of the above

He checked the bikes parked outside Food Distribution it was always fun to help with the deliveries he hoped he would find his friend there.

Which of the following sentence correctly repairs the run-on sentence above?

• He checked the bikes parked outside Food Distribution. It was always fun to help with the deliveries and he hoped he would find his friend there.

• He checked the bikes parked outside Food Distribution; it was always fun to help with the deliveries, and he hoped he would find his friend there.

• He checked the bikes parked outside Food Distribution, it was always fun to help with the deliveries, and he hoped he would find his friend there.

• He checked the bikes parked outside Food Distribution. It was always fun to help with the deliveries, he hoped he would find his friend there.