STAAR Editing Practice -2024

(15) Mr. Owens, my Coach, insists that I also play in a competitive league to build my skills.

How does sentence 15 need to be changed?

• Change Coach to coach

• Delete the comma after Coach

• Change insists to insisting

• Sentence 15 does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.4.2C

CCSS.L.6.2A

(22) But it's not really fair to make him leave all the time, it's his room too.

What change should be made in sentence 22?

• Change fair to fare

• Delete the word But

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change too to to

Tags

CCSS.L.9-10.2A

(5) "You need to work hard," dad insisted while picking up a calendar and looking at my school and sports schedule.

What change should be made in sentence 5?

• Change dad to Dad

• Delete the comma

• Change schedule to scedule

• No change needs to be made in sentence 5.

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CCSS.L.1.2A

CCSS.L.2.2A

CCSS.L.3.2A

CCSS.L.4.2A

CCSS.L.K.2A

(6) As I shuffled through packet's of information about NJHS, first aid, and music courses, I came across something that stood out.

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• Change stood out to stands out

• Delete the comma after courses to a period

• Change packet's to packets

• The sentence does not need to be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.1.2C

CCSS.L.5.2A

CCSS.L.7.2A

(When Emma was born, mom and dad gave her the tiny room next to theirs.

How should sentence 7 be changed?

• Delete the comma

• Change mom and dad to Mom and Dad

• Change theirs to there's

• Sentence 7 should not be changed

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CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

(4) For one thing, lighthouse keeper's don't fuel and maintain the lamp anymore.

How should sentence 4 be changed?

• Change keeper's to keepers

• Change maintain to maintane

• Change anymore to no more

• Sentence 4 should not be changed.

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

(14) First the foundation of the Cape Hatteras Lighthouse had to be excavatted.

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 14?

• Change Lighthouse to lighthouse

• Insert a comma after Lighthouse

• Change excavatted to excavated

• Make no change

Tags

CCSS.L.2.2C

(20) By the end of the first day, the lighthouse was more than ten feet away from it's original location.

How should sentence 20 be changed?

• Change was to is

• Change it's to its

• Change original to originel

• Delete the comma

Tags

CCSS.L.1.1B

CCSS.L.2.2C

CCSS.L.3.2D

(29) I like to have friends over on the weekends, I would love to be able to talk with them without my younger siblings listening to all my conversations.

What change, if any, needs to be made it sentence 29?

• Change weekends to weekend's

• Change the comma to a semicolon

• Change conversations to convarsations

• Sentence 29 does not need to be changed

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CCSS.L.9-10.2A

(10) Instead of telling my Grandma, I asked the teacher to move me to the front of the room.

What change if any needs to be made in sentence 10?

• Change Grandma to grandma

• Change the comma to a period

• Change asked to ask

• No change needs to be made

Tags

CCSS.L.3.2C

CCSS.L.4.2B

CCSS.L.6.3A

CCSS.L.8.1C