Revising and Editing Task Cards

How should sentence 6 be changed?

• A Delete the apostrophe
• B Change frist to first
• C Change of to for
• D Sentence 6 should not be changed.

What is the BEST way to write sentence 12?

• F She tried the little golden key in the lock. It fit!
• G She tried the little golden key in the lock; it fit!
• H She tried the little golden key in the lock and it fit!
• J She tried the little golden key in the lock, and it fit!

What change should be made in sentence 6?

• A Change were to was
• B Change carried to carry
• C Delete the comma after procession
• D Sentence 6 should not be changed.

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 8?

• F Change me to I
• G Change the period after marvelously to a question mark
• H Delete the quotation marks
• J No change is needed in sentence 8.

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 11 and 12?

• A The members are the long parts and the joints are where the long parts get together.
• B The members are the long parts, and the joints are where the long parts get together.
• C The members are the long parts; so the joints are where the long parts get together.
• D No change needs to be made.

What change, if any, is needed in sentence 2?

• F Change grow to growing
• G Change inside to in side
• H Change the period to a question mark
• J No change is needed in sentence 2.

What change needs to be made in sentence 1?

• A Change Most to All
• B Change his to their
• C Change to to too
• D No change needs to be made in sentence 1.

What is the correct way to write sentence 3?

• F Some animals can use their front or upper limbs to handle objects. Like chimpanzees and squirrels.
• G Like chimpanzees and squirrels some animals can use their front or upper limbs to handle objects.
• H Some animals, like chimpanzees and squirrels, can use their front or upper limbs to handle objects.
• J The sentence is written correctly.

How should sentence 5 be changed?

• A Insert a comma after Cat
• B Delete the comma after do
• C Change speak to speek
• D Sentence 5 should not be changed.

How should sentence 6 be changed?

• F Change He to Her
• G Change haveing to having
• H Change the period to a question mark
• J Sentence 6 should not be changed.