Y9 Writing assessment feedback

he has brown hair

(use "bruns" for brown)

he has green eyes

I will live / I'm going to live (either future form)

they sang for me

(é needed)

I went to the restaurant

he used to love football (use the correct form of "adorer")

I travelled to France (use the right form of "voyager")

(é needed)

well

at school

(è needed)

I did (type 2 perfect tense)