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1. How can Tasha revise sentence 7 to more clearly establish the thesis of this paper? 

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1. he b  Sentences 10 and 11 are choppy and ineffective. What is the best way to revise these sentences? 

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Sentence 14 is unclear because it contains an indefinite reference. Tasha can clarify the meaning of this sentence by changing it to —

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1. Tasha wants to improve the transition between the third paragraph (sentences 13–17) and the fourth paragraph (sentences 18–20). Which sentence could best follow sentence 17 and help improve this transition?

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1.  Tasha wants to add the following detail to the fifth paragraph (sentences 21–27).  

“In fact, it is estimated to have traveled close to 1,100 miles in its six months afloat!”

Where is the most logical place to insert this sentence? 

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1. Tasha wants to provide a better closing for her paper. Which of the following could best be added after sentence 30 to support the previous ideas and bring a humorous conclusion to the paper?

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