12 13 ENL SPaG MY exam reflection

Context: These are sentences from your MY exams, that contain errors that you need to find and correct. Most sentences contain more than one error.

Note, that the sentences are great, often complex sentences, and show some fantastic writing skills.

The sentences were selected because they contain errors that many of you make, so they are useful to most of you. Please listen to your teacher explain the rules. Particularly, because you will be expected to edit and craft your essays for further assessment opportunities.

Correct the sentences:

As he directly says, he did not wanted this horrific genocide against certain race to be happened again in our society.

I think this book 100% should be teach in schools around the world.

Answer explanation

Do not use "I think..." in an academic essay.

People around the world should know events such as the holocaust to prevent them to be happened and to find better solutions if they were happened.

People nowadays forgets about history easily.

If I am Elie I will had the same feeling with him, and I can't even be as tough as him.

This is a common thing to be happened, as I forget....

Night can provide more history knowledges to the students and can also make them feel Elie's feelings.

Only when no one ever forget the history, the disasters like the Holocaust can be prevented from happen again.

Those personal testimony is what makes the message of the book strong.